Love is like the sun
It brightens our day and warms our hearts
Love is like a ribbon, tying the world around us together.
Making us appreciate each other
Love is the purest form of expression
To some extent, we all have the hint of love within our souls
Love is like an abstract problem, only some can truly understand it
Love is the meaning of life
Only those who understand it live in brightness
Those who don’t will always be missing something, something that they will never find.
Love is forgiveness
And our willingness to understand others
Love is what our world is made of
Because without it, our world would be in complete darkness.
Nice, try to write 20 lines. From what i saw you had more to say, so say it. But good job
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A nice, short poem that is short and sweet. I really liked the ribbon simile. Creative, hadn't seen that comparison before. Good job! :)
ReplyDelete-Sunmi P.
good job Hemingway i really enjoyed it and my favorite sentence was when you said love is the meaning of life
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